Holding a ham sandwich in his hand mike said ‘’want to have a
sleepover” to his two best friends Bob and Mason. Both of them said “sure” with
an energetic attitude and full of excitement. Later the 2 friends came
with a white clean pillow and a shiny interesting flashlight. The
three boys went down to the basement to set up the base. After building the
fantastic base Mike yelled “Done” because Mason was in the room. Mason hurried to the area and was speechless. During the sleepover, high winds picked
up casing the power to go out. Bob grabbed the flashlight to give them light
but Bob said the flashlight battery is dead. Then the 3 boys hid in the
base till the power went back on.
i like how all the words you need to use are spread out
ReplyDeletei think you could use more descriptive words e.g when down into the dark basement.
ReplyDeletei think you could find a new word for in
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