There was a huge terrifying
castle. There was a king who was very kind and generous. “The queen has awoken,
yelled a knight.
The queen was super
ill and was desperate to find a daffodil to cure the sickness. A knight was
sent off to find the beautiful flower of heal, but there was a map to help him
reach it, but where was it? He asked the king and he replied saying
“You need to go by a
gigantic bridge that is not safe to pass” When he was walking he found a pink sign saying
“Do not cross”
But continued on,
suddenly dust sprinkled into his the….
HI TheBigDream6,
ReplyDeleteI really your story because it is interesting and dramatic. Next time maybe you could make sure it is edited and make sense like when you said "But continued on, suddenly dust sprinkled into his the" and it doesn't make much sense. But other than that I wouldn't change anything else.